Brainstorming Ideas - The Social Worker

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Dear cohorts,

I would like to respectfully write some words about the article that was assigned to us this week: 

 Owais Shafique (2012) ‘Recruitment in the 21st Century’. IJCRB.webs.com 4 ( 2) Institute of Interdisciplinary Business Research, Available online from: http://search.ebscohost.com.ezproxy.liv.ac.uk/login.aspx?direct=true&db=bth&AN=83518189&site=eds-live&scope=site 

I just finished reading it and it is surreal how it lacks basic English writing skills and has a truncated aspect. 

Here I have some examples of the article that show  what I meant by stating the above: 

Strategic recruitment is of vital importance in recruitment planning now a day(now a days). We also found the usefulness of Generation X approach in identifying the differences between the old generation and the young new ( young or new? chose one)Generation x and the different needs and attitudes of both the( there is no need for “the”)  generations.

…” Try to use “you” instead of “we need” & “must have”…

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